not making new paragraphs when a new person is speaking Pet peeve of the century!!!!!!!!!! Each new speaker should have his or her own new paragrah. No two people talking in one paragraph. NO! Also, if the person hasn't finshed speaking, and there's some narrative in between two streams of dialogue, it needs to be super clear that the same person is going to speak some more and not another person if a new paragraph is started.
*am really drunk, but still really passionate about this issue*
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Date: 2008-12-05 05:30 am (UTC)From:Pet peeve of the century!!!!!!!!!! Each new speaker should have his or her own new paragrah. No two people talking in one paragraph. NO! Also, if the person hasn't finshed speaking, and there's some narrative in between two streams of dialogue, it needs to be super clear that the same person is going to speak some more and not another person if a new paragraph is started.
*am really drunk, but still really passionate about this issue*